2009年10月24日 星期六

High Education



In this century, because of the result of universal education, you can easily find someone who has already graduated from college or institute. However, the concept of the necessity of high education was not seen in the ancient society. In the past, only those, who were the emperors’ officials and usually were emperors’ relatives, could them and their children have the chances to learn. And, their children would heir their fathers’ job as a cycle and those conditions are only for male. After many years, there were some kind emperors who wanted to promote more intelligent people for the country; then, the door to a better life was opened for ordinary people, which still was for male only. Since that time, the ideal of high education to get a better job for life has been rooted deeply in their minds. Later, with the advocacy of the gender equity or feminist, women gain their right to have the education and get a better job as men do.

Overview the whole development of the universal education in history, it’s a hard and long road, which we, now, should make better use of the good system of education and study hard in this contemporary society for reasons. For one thing, there were not so many schools for people to go as we have now. For another, in the ancient times, there were wars everywhere and the whole society was unstable; so, that time didn’t have a good learning environment as we have now. Thirdly, in this new and high technology century, with a great emphasis on multicultural education, you can choose whatever you like to study in schools and discover your potential ability. Still another, if you can’t afford the tuition, there are many ways to help you provided by government. Besides, there are also many scholarships to encourage students to work hard. In short, it has become much easier to be educated in the current society. Only working hard is the thing we have to do.

Nevertheless, some people don’t agree that studying is the only way to succeed. They think they don’t need to get high educational credits to do what they want to do. In their opinion, firstly, with their born-to-be special talent, they might become the next superstars such as those popular singers or sports stars who earn more than one million dollars per year. Thus, they don’t think that they should waste time on further studying. Secondly, for those who want to be a baker or engineer in the future, they would prefer being the apprentice to learn the skills than learning in some other colleges. Thirdly, they even don’t think that they would really learn what they wish to learn in the school. In fact, they totally doubt the education system even though schools all highlight that how well their ideals about multiple education. Therefore, some people choose to go on studying while they choose to step into the society earlier.

In conclusion, according to our laws, nine-year universal compulsory education is required. But, after that, there are two ways you could decide to go. Some may continue to study because it is necessary to have opportunities to get a well-paid occupation in this modern century. Yet, others may like to experience the real society for the first time since they believe that they can do well without going to college. In the end, no matter what their decisions are, high education has been taken as an essential qualification for more and more companies. For example, an opening selection for a cleaner might consist of hundreds of college students. So, certain education is needed in this fast-changing society, which we are not supposed to pay no attention to it.

1 則留言:

  1. Hi Jack!
    I am shocked by such long paragraph when entering your blog, but after check it out, I think it is not so hard to understand such well-organized essay. Whatever words you used are absolutely correct in places they should be and grammar errors are almost invisible in this essay! To me, as a reader, I think someone who can write this essay is greater than anyone who called themselves as a man of success. Because I think the supernova is shinny in this place, low-profile and modest, that is you, Jack. The only thing that I gotta suggest is that sometimes you used to much comma to keep a sentence going, but it will help nothing on reader in memorizing your details and separate each statements. All in all, your essay is a bomb to me.
    Sincerely yours, Peter.

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